[IELTS Writing] 기출 12 – Test 5
캠브릿지 대학 공식 출판 교재 12권 아카데믹 Test 5 공부한 내용 정리 및 오답 노트
어느 나라의 연령대, 남녀 별 정기적으로 운동하는 퍼센트 bar chart 분석
- 5.0 – 5.5 점
- 애초에 잘못쓰인 답안은 의도를 살려서 고쳐도 +1점 정도 됨. 예시 답안은 작성자 의도를 살려서 고치는 연습만 하고 모범 답안을 반복 공부.
- 녹색 : 나의 교정 (틀릴 수 있음) , 빨강 : 강사 교정
The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australia men and women in different age group who did regular physical activity in 2010. It’s interesting to the bar chart.
In 15 to 24, Australian men’s percentage of doing regular physical activity is 52.8 and women ‘s percentage is 47.7. Compare with men and women, men’s percentage is higher than women’s percentage.
However, bars’s changed and interesting. After 25 to 64, men’s percentage are increasing. In 25 to 34, men’s percentage is 42.2
Besides, In 35 to 44, the percentage are decrease until 39.5. After over 45 age, a few increase like 43.7, 45.1 and 46.7. However, the percentage couldn’t over 50%. Then, women’s percentages are increase until 54 age like 52.5, 53.3.
Although women’s percentages are decrease after 55 age, the percentages are higher than men’s percentages. In conclusion, men did regular physical activity more than women when they were teenager and mid twenties. After mid-twenties, however, men’s percentage was decreased and women’s percentage was increase.
점수대별 특징 및 장점 정리